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 Chapter One
« Thread Started on May 10, 2005, 11:53am »
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You stepped out of the space shuttle and smile

“Padema it’s so good to see you!!” you yelled as you jumped and hugged her but she didn’t hug back.

“Hi” she said in a sad voice.

“Padema whats wrong?”

“I know………”

“Know what?” you asked confused

“I know you love Anikin” she said slowly

“Padema I wasn’t going to-“<br>
“Don’t speak you’ve betrayed me (you) how could you betray me?”

“Padema I wasn’t going to say anything to him about it. He loves you and only you, you have nothing to worry about”

“But now it will be weird to talk to you”

“Padema you two are married so stop acting so childish”

“I’m acting childish? Well you’re acting like a love sick puppy”

“How did you know anyway Padema?”

“Obi-one told me”

You started running off crying and sobbing you hate your father for tell your friend. You run in your room and slam the door. The door opened and it was Anikin.

“(You) are you alright?” he asked

“Anikin? Hi”

“My mother died” he said sadly

“I’m sorry I know Padema told me”

“Why did she have to die (You) It’s not fair!!”


“Some things you cant control Annie”

“That’s what Padema said”

“Anikin I’m sorry about your mother”

“Did Obi ever tell you about your mother?”

“No in fact I don’t know anything about her”

“See? Obi is so stupid he’s a JERK!!” Anikin throws his light saver at your wall.

“Anikin don’t blame my father for your mother’s death. At least you knew your mother when you were little I didn’t know mine at all I didn’t even get to meet her”

“Well I’m not you! My mother actually cared enough to be with me for a little while” after he said this tears started swelling in your eyes.

“Are you saying my mother didn’t care about me?!?!”

“Maybe! I don’t know (You) I’m so confused”

“Anikin……..I-I love you I know it won’t mean anything coming from me since we’re just friends but I thought you should know” Anikin stared at you in shock he went up to you and frowned.

“It doesn’t mean anything to me (You) I know your in pain because of that it’s just I’ve known Padema since I was a boy”

“So did I, I used to play with you when we were young and then she came along-“

“Don’t talk bad about Padema she’s your friend” then that’s when Anikin started getting frustrated. He looked at you with sad eyes.

“Not anymore she hates me because I’m in love with you”<br>
“I’m sorry I don’t love you back”

“It’s not your fault it’s mine Padema is right I’m so childish” Anikin lifted your chin up so you would look at him in the eyes he smiled and bended down and claimed your lips as his. You moaned with pleasure. Oh the torture! You didn’t know that your father was watching behind the door. Obi sighed with frustration and went to Yoda.

“Is there something you need master Obi-One?” asked Yoda with a concerned look.


“You don’t know?” Asked Obi

Yoda sighed and nodded.

“I know that your daughter is ignoring the consequences for loving a Jedi” said Yoda

“She’s only 18 she can’t help it she has hormones” said Obi

Again Yoda sighed.

“Yes but Anikin knows better. If (You) wants to become a Jedi she must obey the rules. I’m sorry you cannot train your daughter anymore master Obi one” said Yoda

“I can talk some senses into her please let me train her!!” Yelled Obi

“Obi one great anger I sense in (You) and Anikin you cannot train them do I make my self clear?” asked Yoda

“Crystal!” Obi snapped. Then he left by slamming the door.

Anikin broke away from the kiss and sighed.

“I’m sorry (You)” he said

“I know. But Anikin you said I was beautiful when we were kids. We would always talk about getting married” you said

“We were stupid and naïve” said Anikin. Then you froze those words broke your heart tears started flowing down your cheeks.

“(You) I didn’t-“

“No don’t say anything………I hate you………” you picked up the bottom of your dress and started running.

In the bathroom you wiped off your mouth with water, trying to wipe the kiss off. You started wiping your face so much it turned red. You sank down the floor and sobbed.
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« Reply #1 on Jan 15, 2006, 11:53am »
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It surprises me that a moderator could get all the names so wrong.
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« Reply #2 on Jan 23, 2006, 8:38pm »
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I agree with Densetzu.
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